Ryan, I really like the actions of your lower body, you have a good forward move and use your hips quite well.  The BIG thing that we need to create in your swing is a load with your hands and shoulders.  When you watch your swing just focus on your hands.  They really do nothing in this swing, they just sit by your shoulder and then you push the knob towards the ball.  We want to create a load that will result in your hands being pulled behind your shoulder and then your shoulder pulls them to the ball rather than just throwing your hands at it.  Their are muscles much bigger in your body than there are in your hands, we need to use those muscles.